Sunday, February 17, 2013

Pope's resignation_Benny

it's sure everybody has been strucked by pope' s revelation: anybody aspected it.I realized just his "closer" knew about his healthy conditions.If they get worse everyday, in my opinion I think he made the wise  decision :he told the love he feeds for God is too big that when he realized he couldn't serve Him anymore, because of his bad conditions about his intellectual faculties,he decided to resign to make elect another Pope which will be better than him.
Some people said he took this decision  because he wasn't able to face properly all the circumstances and the "problems" being this period, such as "omosexuality" and things like these. Well,I can strongly suggest  reading one of his latest speeches.
He faced in the best way all this situations : he has well done his duty.
I affirm these because I documented myself to understand better the reality :I think the best way to know if something is wrong or not, is looking at the reality..


2 comments:

  1. Hi Benny,
    This is a nice positive article (I don't actually know what the original task was but presume it was an article??) You have stated your opinions nice and clearly and sympathetically to the subject.

    Here are a few points:
    - Do start with a capital letter!!! Am sure this is just a typo (typing mistake).
    - "It's sure (or certain) that ...." sounds better here.
    - struck (irregular very) by the Pope's ...
    - Did you intend to say "revelation" or "resignation"?
    - nobody expected it.
    - ... just his closest companions knew about his health conditions.
    - If they were getting worse every day ( = 2 words)
    - a wise decision
    - he said that (rather than told). If you use told you need to add who you are telling, e.g. he told his followers ...
    - ...the love he feels for God is so strong (or great) that ...
    - serve Him any more (= 2 words)
    - the bad condition (or state) of his intellectual faculties
    - to make way for another Pope who would be ...
    - move "properly" to after "period"
    - problems of this period (not "being")
    - spelling - homosexuality
    - Word order - "He faced all these situations in the best possible way."
    - Word order - He has done (or did) his duty well.
    - Not sure quite what you mean by the last bit. What exactly did you document yourself?

    Nice sensitive piece. Well done.
    Best regards, Sherry

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  2. thank you very much again, without your help I would not know how to improve my knowledge.

    :) Thanks :)

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