It was a trip I will never forget. It was a hot day in August: I left for London with my cousin and my family. In my heart I knew it was a fantastic experience. After a Sunday spent in London, to the shops, we went to college in a town near the city.
The college is called Ardmore and services were no doubt excellent. Me and my cousin we soon adapted to the environment by getting acquainted with people and kids from all around the world! The first week was the hardest because we had to get used to the conditions of the school.
However, we could always have fun doingactivities in the afternoon that the structure proposed. In the second week we werefull of energy and serenely facing the courses in the morning and afternoon activities with more energy. I hope to repeat as soon as this experience, thank you Mary.
It was a trip I will never forget.
It was a trip I will never forget.
Bye to all
With Love <3
Michele
hi michele. it sounds like you had fun on the course. I think you should have used "without doubt" instead of "no doubt" and "serenely facing the course " is not something someone english would say. Perhaps "working hard on the course in the morning" would be more english?
ReplyDeleteYes. Thanks for your response. Bye
ReplyDeleteI knew it would be a fantastic experience
ReplyDeleteMy cousin and I
structure - 'programme' would be better
I hope to repeat this experience soon
Kay